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"When the fault has been acknowledged and reset, the alarm beacon [XI03] will be extinguished."

I'm not happy with extinguished as it's more appropriate when talking about fires or flame-based lights.

Any ideas?

TiA


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 3:54 pm
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Be switched off

Or

Switch off


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 3:55 pm
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.....will cease.


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 3:55 pm
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deactivated?


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 3:58 pm
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cancelled

will go out

go off


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 3:59 pm
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"will self destruct after 30 seconds."

Then see if anyone notices....


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:00 pm
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deactivated

this


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:00 pm
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I don't have a problem with 'extinguished' in that context, but:

Stop illuminating
Be cancelled.
Be switched off.

I wouldn't, though, say 'be de-illuminated', tempting as it is! 😉

ETA: Yeah, 'deactivated' works for me.


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:00 pm
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...will stop sounding.

or just will stop.

or will no longer be illuminated.


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:00 pm
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The alarm beacon will be illuminated until the fault has been.....


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:01 pm
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Cancelled and switched off, to me, suggests that it won't function again.

@ads678 - your beacon is faulty.


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:04 pm
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The alarm beacon will continue until the fault has been acknowledged and reset.

Until the fault has been acknowledged and reset, the alarm beacon will be activated.

Lights can be extinguished though, it's perfectly good grammar


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:06 pm
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dunkel blinkenlighted


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:08 pm
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@richmars - i quite like that. It's a different way in.

"The alarm beacon will remain illuminated (red) until the fault has been acknowledged and reset."

Ta.

Any more?


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:08 pm
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You and your family must take cover?


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:10 pm
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no longer illuminate.

go out.

Is 'beacon' appropriate if it's just a light?


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:11 pm
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Extinguished is the correct word in that context IMO.


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:13 pm
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Put into impossible-to-ignore-strobe-mode until your next [chargeable] service visit by a qualified engineer. To book a service visit please call our premium rate number.


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:22 pm
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@derek_starship yeah I realised after I'd put 'sounding' it was an alarm beacon, rather than an alarm!!


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:30 pm
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Deactivated, or how about quiesced?


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:30 pm
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Quelled?

Honestly, I'd be leaning towards plain English here. "When there's a fault, the light comes on. When the fault has been cleared, the light goes out." I'm all for florid language but there's a time and a place. And instruction guides aren't the place to be calling a spade a manually operated air-cooled earth-moving device.


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:35 pm
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When you hear the air attack warning
You and your family must take cover

Ow, ow, ow
Ow, ow
Let's go

When two tribes go to war
A point is all you can score
Score no more
Score no more
When two tribes go to war
A point is all you can score
Working for the black gas

*salutes martinhutch


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:36 pm
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Cease to exist and vanish into the eternal nothingness that defines your own future


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:39 pm
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Simplified English indeed.

Extinguish is acceptable for putting out a fire or stopping a light from shining so I'll stick with it.

As you were.


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:44 pm
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My fave is the Annihilation version, takes me back to the 70s/80s when we all thought it was for real....

If any member of the family should die whilst in the shelter from contamination, put them outside
But remember to tag them first for identification purposes...


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 4:53 pm
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‘When blackbird calls - red robin goes silent’


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 5:07 pm
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Is ‘beacon’ appropriate if it’s just a light?

'signal light'
'indicator'
'warning light'


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 5:11 pm
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'If any member of the family should die whilst in the shelter from contamination, put them outside
But remember to tag them first for identification purposes…'

Ha ha ha yeah I'm using that on the next bivi trip!

ps where's the tool bar gone?


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 5:12 pm
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When blackbird calls – red robin goes silent

Execute order 66.


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 5:19 pm
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Deluminated???


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 5:22 pm
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“When the fault has been acknowledged and reset, the alarm beacon [XI03] stops.”


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 5:55 pm
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“When the fault has been acknowledged and reset, the alarm beacon [XI03] keep sounding until death comes as merciful release"


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 5:57 pm
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no longer illuminate(d)

This instantly reminded me of "Go stick your head in a pig"

ps where’s the tool bar gone?

I thought that, something's changed the settings. Go into your Account and tick the box for 'Fancy editor'


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 6:04 pm
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... will commence deactivation mode

... will be a con siderably dimmer one

...will not work


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 6:05 pm
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“When the fault has been acknowledged and reset, the alarm beacon [XI03] goes eerily quiet and Skynet is sentient. Phone loved ones.”


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 6:30 pm
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...will become fecund with possibilities


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 6:32 pm
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"Honestly, I’d be leaning towards plain English here. “When there’s a fault, the light comes on. When the fault has been cleared, the light goes out.” "

I'd go with this one

Ps, speaking of extinguished, the tool bar is now an ex-tool bar


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 6:34 pm
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I thought that, something’s changed the settings. Go into your Account and tick the box for ‘Fancy editor’

Ta


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 6:35 pm
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DELETEd
EXTERMINATEd


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 6:36 pm
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Ps, speaking of extinguished, the tool bar is now an ex-tool bar

It has ceased to be


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 6:37 pm
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your beacon is faulty.

And your helicopter is made of cheese. 😉


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 7:46 pm
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will go out

keep the language as simple as possible


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 7:50 pm
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“When the fault has been acknowledged and reset, the alarm beacon [XI03] will be dismantled by Mols and cease to operate”


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 7:54 pm
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You need to be careful with the use of out and off. They often don't translate as well as you'd imagine.

"when the system is reset the light will go out" could be translated to "the light will go off". Does that mean its illuminated or not?

I'd go with

"“When the fault has been acknowledged and system reset, the previously active alarm indicator light [XI03] will deactivate.”


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 8:01 pm
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Who is th eaudience for this?

the simpler the language the easier to undertand and the more likely things will be done properly.

Deactivate / extinguish?  eh?  goes out is simpler, clearer and easier to understand


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 8:44 pm
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Or just stop.
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Hammer time!


 
Posted : 23/11/2021 10:12 pm
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Is the light going off the same as alarm going off? What about a light or alarm going on?


 
Posted : 24/11/2021 9:53 am
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[IMG] [/IMG]


 
Posted : 24/11/2021 11:17 am
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No likee
No lighty


 
Posted : 24/11/2021 2:08 pm
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X8103 will no longer be in an alarm state.


 
Posted : 24/11/2021 3:00 pm

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