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[Closed] Road ride website - can you give this a check for my FIL

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My Father in law is starting up a European cycling tour company again after selling up a cycling holiday company he had in the south of France 8 years ago.

Would you be able to take a look at his new website and give us some feedback. Good or bad most appreciated 🙂

http://www.rscycletours.com/


 
Posted : 08/05/2015 4:10 pm
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Ooh! Steve and Brenda back in the business!
We used to go down to them twice a year!
Looks good on a quick look - might be worth checking spelling again...


 
Posted : 08/05/2015 5:32 pm
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Too many capital letters in the first page. Grammar should have precedence over trendiness. Looks good though


 
Posted : 08/05/2015 5:36 pm
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Ooh! Steve and Brenda back in the business!
We used to go down to them twice a year!

What's your name, I'm with them now and they love talking about the old days

Thanks Mattsccm - I'll take a look at grammar and have a play around and remove a few capital letters


 
Posted : 08/05/2015 5:40 pm
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Andrew & Lesley... Say hi to them, glad to hear that they're well.
We still have that tandem - now known as the "Adult Discussion tandem".


 
Posted : 08/05/2015 5:41 pm
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Changed grammar etc on front page and all looking much neater, IMO.

Do you guys think it is too late in the year for people to be arranging riding trips abroad?

Andrew & Lesley - Steve and Brenda say hi!


 
Posted : 11/05/2015 5:38 pm
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I'd stick a footer on the bottom of each page with contact details, address etc. These are the kind of things that a) reassure people you're legit and b) make it really easy for people to phone/email you. Nothing worse than not having details to hand.

Can't say I'm a fan of the clip art on the contact us page either...

It might just be me (mac, firefox, adblock + ghostery) but once I've click on a link to navigate to a different page, the rest of the links on the header stop working.


 
Posted : 11/05/2015 6:35 pm

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